Wednesday, May 09, 2007

canary

"i don't know where a part of my heart is"
think he left it
on a train station


half-heartedly
he sang along with canaries
they filled his head with pointless dreams

the godless child sings
in the tune of unstructured complexity
and ends with no trace, of anonymity

vignette

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10 Comments:

Blogger Kishie said...

i really really really like this.
i really do.

09 May, 2007 08:47  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

YoU aRe SuCh A hOpELeSs RoMaNtIc BrO.. cHiLl BrO. tHeRe Is MoRe To LiFe ThAn LoVe-Go FiGuRe!

09 May, 2007 18:53  
Blogger pinknerd said...

i'm poetically challenged. tsk.

09 May, 2007 22:28  
Blogger (nothingness) said...

i really didn't know what i was writing about.`

11 May, 2007 01:18  
Blogger (nothingness) said...

bah, my vocab sucks. the word choices are too direct. i need to read more.

11 May, 2007 03:12  
Blogger Kishie said...

no no, simple is nice. i like it that way. one word might mean more than one thing to a person.

11 May, 2007 10:40  
Blogger pinknerd said...

choice of words don't matter when expressing yourself, does it? well, i don't think so. haha.

11 May, 2007 20:45  
Blogger (nothingness) said...

true. but sometimes you have something on your mind, but can't find the right words to express. that's another problem.


by the way sean it's not necessarily about love.

12 May, 2007 03:07  
Blogger Natasha B. said...

I used to read from, cover to cover, the Reader's Digest Thesaurus and Dictionary of Unusual Words (or something to that effect; it was definitely published by RD though) It had the meanings and synonyms of all kinds of words that you'd never think of looking up or asking the meaning of. Huhuhu.

Nerdy, I know. But hey.

12 May, 2007 15:52  
Blogger (nothingness) said...

but you write oh so well pudtz

13 May, 2007 02:33  

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