Saturday, August 18, 2007

1 second 1 bit


you tried so hard

but haven't changed 1 bit

and you thought you were stronger than this

consumed by regret
you cry.
but the tears don't sympathize

if only you had just stopped
and stayed still for just. 1. second.
and not walk away

is that so much to ask for?
is it fear that dragged you into irrationality?
protects the bitter trace of your existence

ending things before they even began
you haven't changed 1 bit.

hopefully you would
eventually
one day


wall
i am so ashamed of myself

18 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

DuDe..YoU GoT iSsuE mEh? Go ShOpPInG lOr..LiFe ToO sHoRt tO bE pIsSeD oFf WiTh EvErYtHInG mAa...

BtW gIvE iT a ShOt So ThAt At LeAsT yOu TriEd RaThEr ThAn DwElLs On It FoR rEsT yOuR lIfE wItH " wHaT iF? "

TaKe YoUr BlOoDy TiMe AnD nEvEr LeT aNyoNe BuGs oR pUsH yOu tO dO sOmEtHiNg UnLEsS...WhAtEvEr !

18 August, 2007 21:28  
Blogger Vernon Kedit said...

Excellent choice of pic and love the music on your page.

18 August, 2007 23:05  
Blogger pinknerd said...

my favourite so far.

19 August, 2007 01:31  
Blogger yaya schmaya said...

wow :)

19 August, 2007 01:45  
Blogger (nothingness) said...

sean: thanks dude.

mr manager: the window is me. the song is me as well.


pink: seriously? its a little too literal for my liking.

yaya: whoa!

19 August, 2007 03:10  
Blogger pinknerd said...

in more ways than one, being literal is always better than equivocal.

as honest as they might seem, they carry more weight.


plus, for an emo junkie like me, i like anything stark raving honest.

19 August, 2007 17:11  
Blogger Kishie said...

i really like the blank spaces. i hate the word space. im hearing too much of it at school.

19 August, 2007 22:41  
Blogger (nothingness) said...

pinK: i suppose. but things are way more interesting when they're a little vague

kish: 'blank' spaces? hahaha. there's stuff behind them. i hate the word space as well.

19 August, 2007 23:04  
Blogger Kishie said...

i know :D

20 August, 2007 04:58  
Blogger *cosmic freak* said...

I like the different shades of light from each window. nice one faiz.

you didn't come for the documentary screening huh? hurm .....

21 August, 2007 19:49  
Blogger Natasha B. said...

Where was this pic taken? Odd that I kind of like those windows.

21 August, 2007 22:42  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

nice... ~

22 August, 2007 01:41  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

nice poem.

you really look like Yusry. You shud be a rock star.

23 August, 2007 12:26  
Blogger Miss Aida said...

I find it hilarious that someone said Yusry and rock star in the same sentence.

The window reminds me of the Croft windows.

23 August, 2007 15:34  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

U shud read that someone's comment again and see if he really did put Yusry and rock star in the same sentence.

24 August, 2007 00:19  
Blogger (nothingness) said...

big K: LOL. haha.

cosmic: i was on my way, but the i was too tired. i dozed off while driving, luckily it was at a red traffic light.

a little busy these days lah. a lot of things going on at once.

24 August, 2007 02:18  
Blogger (nothingness) said...

by the way, this was taken in melbourne: hosier lane, off flinders lane.


big K: uhm. rock star?!

24 August, 2007 03:21  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

yeah. because it's cooler than saying "u shud be a pop star".

25 August, 2007 21:06  

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