1 second 1 bit
you tried so hard
but haven't changed 1 bit
and you thought you were stronger than this
consumed by regret
you cry.
but the tears don't sympathize
if only you had just stopped
and stayed still for just. 1. second.
and not walk away
is that so much to ask for?
is it fear that dragged you into irrationality?
protects the bitter trace of your existence
ending things before they even began
you haven't changed 1 bit.
hopefully you would
eventually
one day
i am so ashamed of myself

18 Comments:
DuDe..YoU GoT iSsuE mEh? Go ShOpPInG lOr..LiFe ToO sHoRt tO bE pIsSeD oFf WiTh EvErYtHInG mAa...
BtW gIvE iT a ShOt So ThAt At LeAsT yOu TriEd RaThEr ThAn DwElLs On It FoR rEsT yOuR lIfE wItH " wHaT iF? "
TaKe YoUr BlOoDy TiMe AnD nEvEr LeT aNyoNe BuGs oR pUsH yOu tO dO sOmEtHiNg UnLEsS...WhAtEvEr !
Excellent choice of pic and love the music on your page.
my favourite so far.
wow :)
sean: thanks dude.
mr manager: the window is me. the song is me as well.
pink: seriously? its a little too literal for my liking.
yaya: whoa!
in more ways than one, being literal is always better than equivocal.
as honest as they might seem, they carry more weight.
plus, for an emo junkie like me, i like anything stark raving honest.
i really like the blank spaces. i hate the word space. im hearing too much of it at school.
pinK: i suppose. but things are way more interesting when they're a little vague
kish: 'blank' spaces? hahaha. there's stuff behind them. i hate the word space as well.
i know :D
I like the different shades of light from each window. nice one faiz.
you didn't come for the documentary screening huh? hurm .....
Where was this pic taken? Odd that I kind of like those windows.
nice... ~
nice poem.
you really look like Yusry. You shud be a rock star.
I find it hilarious that someone said Yusry and rock star in the same sentence.
The window reminds me of the Croft windows.
U shud read that someone's comment again and see if he really did put Yusry and rock star in the same sentence.
big K: LOL. haha.
cosmic: i was on my way, but the i was too tired. i dozed off while driving, luckily it was at a red traffic light.
a little busy these days lah. a lot of things going on at once.
by the way, this was taken in melbourne: hosier lane, off flinders lane.
big K: uhm. rock star?!
yeah. because it's cooler than saying "u shud be a pop star".
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